storyboard notes:
1) After shot 13 we see a shot from the end of the corridor as she gets to the bottom of the stairs and peers her light round the corner at the camera. this will help to give the audience a bit more exposition and help them understand the layout of the house whilst still cutting out the useless travel time that dampens the pacing. Shot 14 isn't going to be included in the final product as too many cuts in the scene dampens the tension.
2) after shot 15 there's a handheld panning shot from her POV that shows the empty kitchen and ends on seeing the target: the change box where the keys are supposed to be. we now return to shot 15 as she walks into the kitchen
3) shot 16: shadow might actually be just a person that glides across the shot. we could roll them on something to create inhuman movement and shows how the shadow is beginning to perfect its form in copying a person.






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